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on: June 10, 2013, 09:33:26 PM
Every Day

When I wish upon a star,
every time so far,
I wish that I could be there,
right there where you are.

Every day, I die a little,
every day I cry a little.
About you.
Without you.

I long to see your smile,
and you tell me after awhile,
we'll forget that we're in love,
and find the bliss in denial.

Every day, I die a little,
every day I cry a little.
About you.
Without you, I am through.

Dedicated to my favorite woman on earth, who will remain anonymous.

Don't sweat the petty stuff, pet the sweaty stuff.

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Reply #1 on: June 10, 2013, 11:42:32 PM
that is simple, and romantic, excellent, well written!
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Reply #2 on: June 11, 2013, 03:17:37 AM
Thanks. There is no possible way I could express how I truly feel about her. It is sad we can't be together, but life is like that, sometimes.

Don't sweat the petty stuff, pet the sweaty stuff.

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Reply #3 on: June 11, 2013, 04:11:04 AM
Lost love is very difficult, ur expression, makes me think of my losses. It was hard not to self destruct, and sometimes I did to a certain degree. There can also be regret in giving of oneself, or falling in love. It is normal for any decent person to experience what you expressed so truthfully. Granted it is an old cliche, but it is better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all.


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Reply #4 on: June 11, 2013, 05:20:12 AM
What makes it harder is that I didn't lose her, we just don't work as a couple. We love each other, and that kills sometimes.

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Reply #5 on: June 11, 2013, 05:25:14 AM
Lovely - just lovely.


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Reply #6 on: June 11, 2013, 05:37:54 AM
Was a beautiful Poem fish.


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Reply #7 on: June 11, 2013, 07:39:42 AM
Thanks guys. This one was much more personal than my other stuff usually is.

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Reply #8 on: June 11, 2013, 07:57:30 AM
Writing from the heart can be the toughest thing to do, beautiful.


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Reply #9 on: June 11, 2013, 01:54:03 PM
That was awesome Fish, great writing from a great guy.  Thanks so much for sharing it with the board.


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Reply #10 on: June 13, 2013, 08:40:10 PM
Good stuff man, unpretentious and lyrical, thank you.


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Reply #11 on: June 13, 2013, 11:03:28 PM
Thank you very much, I really tried hard with this one.

Thanks to everyone who reads and replies to myself and others. It is hard to write this stuff, and appreciated when someone takes the time to let you know you did a good job.

Don't sweat the petty stuff, pet the sweaty stuff.

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